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Dance - milath

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June 7, 2002
The winner of the Capture the Spirit of the Dance is Dance - milath. Milath's word crafting made you feel the Lambada’s “heated passion” generated by two dancers with effective use of word combination and structure. Words press close together as the dancers bodies meld as one. “Pullinggrasping her” as “skin pressedagainstmine”, they dance with zeal. One dancer “beat”, the partner “beat” and together they “beatbeat” to the booming rhythm that IS the music and their bodies. Come see the performance as that it is a delight to read! picked by limnersphere. (Selected by +skyorange)
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(then the music begins as)
exotic bass booming
deep puls-a-ting
through our bodies

pullinggrasping her (flesh.toned.bare.midriff.bellychain)
hands g l i d i n g soft
down her arching back
skin pressedagainstmine as

beat beat beatbeats

come faster, coming harder
rhythmic beads of sweat gleam
a jewelled crystal oasis
dripdrip
d
r
i
p
ping down her body
begging-pleading quench this thirst
teasing titillation tickled
with curvacious danger

legs wrapped.TIGHT to mine
feeling molten-volcanic-lava
flowing caressing my knee
grinding ~gyration~ in synchronicity
bending bent back lust forward
domination invading
working her way up
climaxing... with the music.
it's not called the 'forbidden dance' for nothin' ;) (Wink)

my humble entry for [link]

comments welcome. :D (Big Grin)
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WOW. One of the best poems I have read in a long time. I love how you described their actions so well without exposing what exactly they are doing. very discriptive. good work