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Collab - milath and rachael316 by ~milath:iconmilath:



yours is the voice that leads me
into sapphire midnight dreams
and teases me back
into ruby sunrise reality.
perfect hands tremble
through my hair
like wind and i am safe
from the
darkthingsinside.
the sun is warm across
my shoulders like your
heart wrenching kiss
on my fingertips.
shattering my sadness,
yours are the shining moments.
the tiny shards of fractured
time scattered like photos
across my room
reminding me of the
reasons my listless heart
electrifies everytime you
smile, (that crooked way),
the way you hold my hand,
(tighter to keep me safe)
within your arms, the manner
in which you touch, -gently-
(like no one has before)
or simply the way you sigh
(just a little) when you are
about to fall asleep.
when nightmares come
to me, you shake them away
with a whisper, cracking shadows
in a moment of
blistering thunder, you are
ignited within me…
and the revelation of
us becomes
complete.
©2002-2009 ~milath
:iconmilath:

Author's Comments

our humble entry for the group hug poetry contest. [link]

thanks to rachael316 [link] for taking the time to collaborate with me. it was a fun experience and the subject was actually inspired wby one of her journal entries. i hope everyone enjoys this.

this is dedicated to the people in our lives who do the little things that mean so much..

comments welcome and, in fact, encouraged. :D (Big Grin)

Daily Deviation

Given 2002-08-17

Collab - milath and rachael316 by milath and rachael316 is filled with gentle, "shining moments". It is also the winner of the Group Hug Poetry Contest. Congratulations to both of you on a seamless integration of talent, emotion, and romance between two gifted writers. (Selected by +euphoria) (Featured by °euphoria)

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:iconrachael316:
Thanks for everything, sweetheart...collaborating with you was just amazing! We rock! Hug

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Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. --E.L. Doctorow
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:iconhedda:
this is beautiful, you two!!!
I like the parenthetical phrases - they make it seem more "real"...

best of luck!!!!

Love
:iconrenonevada:
You both did a wonderful job. :) (Smile) I hope you two win! You have my vote.

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:iconap3x:
i like the sapphire and ruby parts.

and i agree the parenthetical phrases are nicely done.

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:iconeuphoria:
Great poem! Thanks for entering!

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Kit Lange
Former $Core Staff
Nature Photographer
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:iconstrangelove:
good work, u two seem to have a good understanding of each other's writings. congrats on the contest win, i believe that it is quite worthy of the acknowledgement. i really enjoy the feeling of this piece and the over all mood of it. great work, and again, congratulations.
:iconlubov:
beautiful!!
and congradulations!!!! :) (Smile)
w00t!

--
'a soul in tension, learning to fly
condition grounded but determined to try'
:iconchaosboy:
Beautiful work you too.

Congratulations on winning the contest!

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So Charlize Theron? Two thumbs in....I mean up! Two thumbs up!

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